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    lory sent tingles up my spine." Do those words give more depth? Can you, the reader, better understand what beautiful means?

    "She was sad." Sad? I can be sad when I break my favorite vase, but what I feel as I gaze at the pictures of my missing grandchildren is a so

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    A certain “friend” sits over my shoulder when I write. Now, she sits there figuratively, not literally, but she always says, "Dig deeper. Let me see and feel the emotion." She reads some more before asking, "Where's the emotion? Don't skim the surface. Let me feel what your character felt."

    "But it hurts to feel the emotion enough to share it," I complain.

    "Well (actually she used a stronger word, but I don't), do you really want to be a writer? Then write so the reader feels." She leans back and folds her arms, daring me to be a writer.

    Yes, Jessie, I think I've learned that lesson well by now. However, the stuff I read doesn't show the emotion often. The writer doesn't really do more than scratch the surface of the emotion or emotions needed. I find myself repeating your mantra, "Where's the emotion?"

    "The sunset was beautiful." Huh? What does that mean? What does beautiful mean? Where is the emotion the writer wants to share by using the word beautiful?

    "The golden rays of the sun melted into shades of rose with tinges of orange. The glory sent tingles up my spine." Do those words give more depth? Can you, the reader, better understand what beautiful means?

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    "But it hurts to feel the emotion enough to share it," I complain.

    "Well (actually she used a stronger word, but I don't), do you really want to be a writer? Then write so the reader feels." She leans back and folds her arms, daring me to be a writer.

    Yes, Jessie, I think I've learned that lesson well by now. However, the stuff I read doesn't show the emotion often. The writer doesn't really do more than scratch the surface of the emotion or emotions needed. I find myself repeating your mantra, "Where's the emotion?"

    "The sunset was beautiful." Huh? What does that mean? What does beautiful mean? Where is the emotion the writer wants to share by using the word beautiful?

    "The golden rays of the sun melted into shades of rose with tinges of orange. The glory sent tingles up my spine." Do those words give more depth? Can you, the reader, better understand what beautiful means?

    "She was sad." Sad? I can be sad when I break my favorite vase, but what I feel as I gaze at the pictures of my missing grandchildren is a so

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    Yes, Jessie, I think I've learned that lesson well by now. However, the stuff I read doesn't show the emotion often. The writer doesn't really do more than scratch the surface of the emotion or emotions needed. I find myself repeating your mantra, "Where's the emotion?"

    "The sunset was beautiful." Huh? What does that mean? What does beautiful mean? Where is the emotion the writer wants to share by using the word beautiful?

    "The golden rays of the sun melted into shades of rose with tinges of orange. The glory sent tingles up my spine." Do those words give more depth? Can you, the reader, better understand what beautiful means?

    "She was sad." Sad? I can be sad when I break my favorite vase, but what I feel as I gaze at the pictures of my missing grandchildren is a so

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    Where's the emotion?"

    "The sunset was beautiful." Huh? What does that mean? What does beautiful mean? Where is the emotion the writer wants to share by using the word beautiful?

    "The golden rays of the sun melted into shades of rose with tinges of orange. The glory sent tingles up my spine." Do those words give more depth? Can you, the reader, better understand what beautiful means?

    "She was sad." Sad? I can be sad when I break my favorite vase, but what I feel as I gaze at the pictures of my missing grandchildren is a so

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    lory sent tingles up my spine." Do those words give more depth? Can you, the reader, better understand what beautiful means?

    "She was sad." Sad? I can be sad when I break my favorite vase, but what I feel as I gaze at the pictures of my missing grandchildren is a sorrow so overwhelming that I feel as if a hole is gaping in my chest. The pain is so intense that I actually grab my chest and gasp with the sharp agony.

    Showing the emotion is difficult because a writer must feel the emotion first. When I write of the loss of my youngest child, I have to relive that experience. When I write about facing the fact that my husband may not be with me much longer, I have to feel and then put into the words the horror I am facing. However, through my experiences, I can give the emotions of my fictional characters life.

    Ah, but you say you've never experienced anything like death or extreme pain. When a writer hasn't personally experienced the emotions she is trying to desribe, then she must use imagination.

    So many times I stood in front of high school students explaining how they could take events in their lives and expand those experiences to become descriptions in their writings. If they needed to write about sorrow, I would ask them to think about the saddest thing that ever happened to them and then remember how they felt, re

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